All Comments on 'D.O. Wilson Ch. 01: Innocent Bride'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sorry not for me

I just.....nope sorry I couldn’t get past the first page, it’s beyond silly. It’s a whole pile of misogynistic bollocks. The men are never wrong, not having a hymen is supposedly proof of sexual activity? FFS that’s a double dose of ignorance right there.

It’s a depressing disturbing echo of kinky stepford wives. Definitely not for me, best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good read

Great story! I enjoyed the futuristic setting and unique storyline. I understood it was just a story, and it was very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked it as a story but the whole misogynistic plot turned me off. Well written though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyable but was disappointed in the lack of discipline/punishment. Hopefully more in pt.2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I absolutely love these stories. I love to fantasize being in a male dominated post apocalyptic world. Haha would never want to live it but it's really hot fantasy. I have read this series many times and never get bored.

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