All Comments on 'Dad and Brother Punish Anne'
by dickpussyeater
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoWell this was a piece of crap! Not worth a read. You obviously understand English, it's just a shame you have no concept about writing a story worth telling. Please just stop!
Anonymousover 8 years agoSorry but there was nothing sexy about that dribble. It was if anything a load of rot. As a woman i have to say main character sounds less real than a plastic barbie.
Anonymousover 8 years agoIt is written in Anne's POV but everything that happens is experienced like the men would have experienced it.AShe hears it, sees it, but doesn't feel it.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI really liked it and don't let people convince you it wasn't good I had a good time reading this and i hope you keep writing
Anonymousover 8 years agoAnnie I could not have put it better myself. no woman worte this. It sounds like a bunch of bull. I do not know who at literotica.com is posting this shit but they need to be let go.
ticklechambersabout 8 years agoI liked the concept, would love to see it written with more insight into motives and feelings of the characters. Thumbs up! Feel free to check out any of my own stories + feedback
Anonymousover 6 years agoi liked it until all the grammar mistakes were thrown in my face :(
Anonymousover 4 years agoHow the hell would two large dicks pushing into an asshole at the same time not, first off not go in due to no lubrication and no stretching, and 2 even if magically they went in, wouldn't rupture something and tear the asshole apart. That's not how human physiology works bud.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWell that was definitely...awful. No plot, no build up, no believability. You could definitely tell it was a man who wrote this, and I don’t mean that in a good way. Stick with what you know, which isn’t sec from a woman’s perspective.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoIs this a spoof? It was awful.
Apart from all the stuff everyone else has mentioned, you make the common mistake of suggesting a girl being fucked from behind will feel the boy's balls slapping against her ass cheeks.
As Groucho Marx would say, you are a poor judge of anatomy.
Speaking of how anatomy works, no girl has to worry about getting pregnant, no matter how many cocks she can fit in her ass. Especially if she takes her pill as a suppository.
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