All Comments on 'Dad/Daughter Date Ch. 02'

Just waiting for the next...

One of my favorite p2s but please make it longer

Other than a couple of fairly innocuous typos, I’m not sure you need much editing or other collaboration - we caught the gist of it. I’m enjoying the slow burn to what I hope is a full on date - you know, out of town dinner, dancing, romance - much more satisfying in the long run than a few quick one sided orgasms - not that I’d ever decline being on the receiving side of such a gift.

You have an AWESOME series

I can’t wait for the next chapter

I am so hard

Daddy needs to return the love and eat her sweet pussy

He has to return the favor let it lead to full on sex. It would be nice if he would romance her treat her like a queen, and it progressed from that point. If he has that equipment what is wrong with the ex.

I would be happy to help with proofreading if you'd like. I am really enjoying your stories.

More the start of a live-in lovefest. I have a picture in my head of this girl so recently 18 an obliging sweetheart just the sort friend daddy needs what a love story this could make another 6 chapters I think, climaxing, pun intended, where dad makes her his woman. You write beautifully and I look forward to reading more of this couple. Keep it real.

I love this.......WOW! Keep going please!

Please continue.

This got me excited, but ended too early - I wanted him to return the favour and then to fuck her and show her what a real cock could do to her....

Please continue....

Became domsub so lost a little direction to me. Started with daughter wanting to be nice and ended him controlling her.

You need a proof reader for spelling errors and grammar errors. Otherwise, a good story!!

I guess we'll never know...

It's good stuff but you need a proof reader. Keep up the good work though, very hot.