All Comments on 'Dad Fucks Daughter So Mom Fucks Son'

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chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****That was a HOT read. Thanks for sharing.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Chapter 2 would be nice. I like the story a lot. AAAA+++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sweet, i hope mom got pregnant and they will have more loving sex while she has a baby bump, woman is the most beautiful when she is pregnant!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
"...society can't tell me what to do..."

Most beautiful words a son can hear from his mother. So many amidst the throes of temptation give into safe societal norms instead of greatest love they could experience. Yes a spouse may love them, but never as much as a child.

Am I the only son not as big as his father?

jadams5932jadams5932over 2 years ago

I really like your writing, please keep submitting more stories.

JGellarJGellarover 2 years ago

Dear God that was good.

EZ8ltEZ8ltover 2 years ago

Unfinished as hell.

twistidmonkeytwistidmonkeyover 2 years ago

Sad is wasn't longer but enjoyed it otherwise maybe a part 2 were mom and son confront the dad and sister

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope this story isn't finished. So far it's fantastic, but it ended too abruptly. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So hot...loved mommy"s dirty talk....need another chapter...maybe with dad and daughter too for a 4some

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please, Please do another another chapter.

rjb49@bellsouth.net

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story ! I'll be looking for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would like to read at least one follow up story, maybe more.

tallman441tallman441over 2 years ago

Good story. Sounds as if mother and father need to come to an agreement. Hoping for a second chapter

kimo23kimo23over 2 years ago

Wonderful story

Mr. FeelGoodMr. FeelGoodover 2 years ago

Fantastic! I hope there is a sequel in the future. This story made my day.

Sohioslim78Sohioslim78over 2 years ago

We need more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Nice reading.

Love your stories. Going by the title I was expecting it to be the continuation the of 'Dad Fucks Daughter in the Club' but it's still a good story. I love your style of writing and am looking forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

written by a 12 year old. absolutely terrible

Anallicker01Anallicker01over 2 years ago

Very hot story! Is there a next chapter, I haven't checked? Sure hope so, perhaps dad/son & mom/daughter in their marital bed?

whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

You show promise, need some life experience to really capture your characters. You also need a proofreader or editor.

greasedsilvergreasedsilverabout 2 years ago

Oh, this could get fantastic... with more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A new kind of incest story. Nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hazel is a stupid bitch who was withholding sex from her husband....STUPID STORY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Next they have a foursome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So good 5 stars. Please another chapter where mom rubs sex with son into hubby's face

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh, yeah! This story can go a lot of ways. You must add chapters. Take in the direction YOU want, not what commenters think is right. The obvious isn't away right, sometimes a little intrigue spices it up. Good story line. Keep writing.

XYZ

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Hawt, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

mommysnaughtymommysnaughtyalmost 2 years ago

omg what a mind blowing story. I sure hope there is more to come. I hope every guy that reads this jacks off & every woman reader has a soaking wet pussy mine sure is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
I'd love to fuck my mommy

I'd love to have sex with my Mom

Sex4lf57Sex4lf5712 months ago

Great start! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

4 Stars. Why the hell didn't you find a way to finish this part of the story? You set up the father and Isabella and then the mother and Jonathan, but you didn't follow it through! You just ended this story in the middle? W.T.F.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wow,you need to get a life. Pathetic and delusional

MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

Not even sure how to explain how much trash this story was I'm glad you didn't write another part that was about 5 minutes maybe a little more time that I can never get back I swear I'm a little dumber by just reading this

Sex4lf57Sex4lf576 months ago

Given that it's almost two years since this author published anything, I don't think that we'll see what happens with this family.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

I loved it. Gave it a 5. I hope it leads to a foursome like my Mom and Dad and my brother and me have.

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