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by Earthlyone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
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Part 2?

EarthlyoneEarthlyoneover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm glad this has been published but after reading it through again I can see some typo's and punctuation mistakes, damn it! apologies for that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very natural sounding. Nice sinful feeling

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your self-review is refreshing to see.

Interesting scenario and ideal for numerous added chapters, including and adding to your suggested next meeting.

Well done, looking forward to subsequent offerings.

OseekerOseekerabout 2 months ago

I don't go for 'Pamela Anderson' types so this wasn't my cup of tea...

2 stars and a yawn...

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I'm new to erotic writing; I may not be great at it but I have lots of erotic ideas that I am putting in to words and putting out there on the off-chance it resonates with others.