All Comments on 'Daddy and Amy'

Very good. Keep writing!

Most definitely a hot story but with a few irregularities like "whispering in her ear " while she is sucking his cock . He must be really flexible to pull that off . I'm surprised that he didn't ry to discourage her .

Lovely story - I would love to see where you take this. Definitely one for a follow-up.

Thank you.

read here-The rest maintained my attention-Your ending indicates that you intend to milk the story thru extra chapters--Of course Mom is in on it-Of course mom and daughter have been doing it and of course you will end in a hot threesome---Of course I have read the best part which is how it all started and I have figured out the rest so I will not need to read the extra chapters. But--Good Luck-

Keep it up.

Great story...looking forward to the continuation.

Very good story, Marie. You really need to build on this one.

What a story!! I loved the wat the sexual tension was built up between them. More please.

I want to be her and explore my sexual needs with my Daddy, keep the stories cumming!!

very good!

omg that was so intense. the tension built up was great. can't wait 2 read more.

Very intense and hot and then even more hot.

Very erotic story. Did mom teach her daughter how to stroke his cock? Will he now take his wife, letting her taste her daughter on his lips??? Keep up the story.

This is one of the best stories I've read this year, and the only one that I have checked consistantly for a sequel. Please give us some more.

This was great. Please continue the story.

Awesome story.. i came real hard.. please write a sequel to the story..

Reads like true event.Could not stop to the last line.

9 inch cocks shooting gallons of cum 6 feet onto huge 40ddd tits after a marathon fuck session....how about a tiny bit of reality?

Good tension, and well ended.

Loved it

G'day, MarieTeresa.

You joined Literotica twelve years ago and two days later submitted this highly charged tale about, "Daddy and Amy." The comments following so many Literotica stories ask about a next chapter. Yours is a good example.

Your story is easy to read with its varied and effective word choices, spelling, grammer and punctuation. These elements are missing in so many submissions on this site. At some point, I hope you'll be encouraged to submit more work here.

Bajero

July, 2020