All Comments on 'Daddy Does Didi'

Hi :) Enjoyed the story but... it might need some editing. It is physically impossible to lick your partners arse while you are socketed deep in their cunt. A body just doesn't bend that far at the ribs and stomach.

hot!

Right so, idk if a male or female wrote this, but clearly Daddy is not great at sex in this story. For instance, take Didi’s testimony that no guy has ever nailed her hard enough or good enough to cum, correct? One could even go as far as to say that they could not find the clit like most men. Didi frequently states her pleasure in this copulation with Daddy, however there is one glaring issue. In page one, paragraph 21, Didi extrapolates, and I quote, “hits my g-spot with every thrust, while his cock slides hard against my clit.”. To be clear, this is physically impossible. The clit is not inside the vagina. It is above the vulva, under the “hood” of the outermost lips. There is no way Daddy could be pounding Didi’s pussy and sliding his dick on her clit. If Daddy is so knowledgeable about vaginas, surely he would know where the clit was? Let’s say, for the sake of argument, it is Didi in fact who does not know where her clit is. Is she missing one? Where did it go? Did it leave for a pack of cigarettes and never come back? Truly a conundrum. It is at this point I implore the reader to find a story in which the characters are actually competent, and that perhaps Didi seek medical care for her misplaced clit.

Some people love a lot of plot and realism, I do from time time as well. But I loved a good old fashioned straight to the fucking incest story. Bravo!! Bring mom back and let's get that dumb batch lol

I loved how you jumped right into it and then kept it going. Best story I've read here in a long time.

Gave up reading a few paragraphs in. It was putting me to sleep. 1 star.

Straight to the point fuck story. Only one complaint: daddy's dialogue is unreal, too much of it and too much of him calling himself Daddy.

By the time didi realizes it she will show dad a present--a baby bump

I’m guessing this was an experiment with “in medias res” narrative style. Like so many experiments, this one fizzled. I’ve read much of your other work and this fails by comparison.

And who talks like that? Are they both blind so they have to tell each other what they’re doing to each other?

There are bad moms or there, but it's hardly believable that one would allow her daughter to end up at the step dad's house without knowledge of the goings on.

Best Valentine's day ever. They didn't waste time, straight into fucking. Lucky girl, my god he fucked her so hard. Mmmh loved it, just bliss

Hot as heck but, as others have mentioned it needs some work

Hardcore 5 stars!!

I give this ★★★★★★ out of 5 ☆ !! Great story, hot sex, is there more of Didi and daddy?

Love it! Hot and fast little stroker. Others have commented on its shortcomings but they don't detract from the action. Well done!