All Comments on 'Daddy: Exclusively Mine'

Daddy needs to continue filling her cunt with his seed until her baby bump begins to show

Too short

1st and foremost...the hyman is not inside the vagina! It is at the entrance to it. 2nd. Your writhing is lazy. Virgins don't talk that way and religious fathers don't just suddenly fuck their daughters. Try some character building. Emotional investment. Actual plot building. One star from start to finish!

Daddy needs to get kinky with her and fuck her while pregnant

First of all the HYMEN spelled with an e, is just like any other part of the anatomy, the depth of which varies from person to person. Secondly I know plenty of virgins that speak this way. Finally there are plenty of "CHRISTIAN" fathers that this happens to. What, do you think just because they are "CHRISTIAN", they don't have the urges, or are not capable of this.

Story could have better build-up and finish, but probably a new writer, and a possibly just a fantasy for her.

Wow, where do I start? I'm a guy and know where a woman's hyman is. Daddy fucking his daughter bareback! Religious family, my ass! 1* and that's generous.

Absolute juvenile garbage. As for this:

"I can see daddy's baby has the body of a woman now, and is dressed like one too. I think it's time daddy gave you a lesson on how to use that body properly, right baby?"

Dreadful, please don't write any more until you've grown up.

This story is rushed, and a bit hard to follow. Where is the girl's surprise that her dad comes in the room and just slaps his hand on her pussy?

This is more rape than consensual.

Aside from any critique as to anatomical correctness, I also found the spelling errors and changes of person interrupted the smooth flow more than a little.

And yes, a bit more character development would make for greater engagement by the readers.

Pay No Attention to the Negativity, It was Great ! Direct and to the Point, without all the BS. Hope part 2 is in the works . Definitely Need to Give Her a Baby and let Daddy Have that Milk !

I thought it was an interesting story but I couldn’t help but wonder where the mother was while her husband was having sex with their daughter. I couldn’t help but wonder what her thoughts would be concerning the situation.