All Comments on 'Daddy Found me Showering'

She should let her Daddy impregnate her and have mother take care of her 'luv' child!

He was 15 when he had her? 18 to 33

not well written at all please get an editor

Sexy_kitty8 Almost reads like an 8 year old wrote it.

Lets see, 15 year old father, salt and pepper hair at 33, mandatory 9 inch cock, mandatory c cup....

No plot or story line, poorly written.... definitely must be an 8 year old.

Please spare us all, and don't bother with the sequel.

Or the second

We know you have to say 18 to be published but really she's only 14 . And that makes it all the more hotter !!!!!

now that i've did say that - - - - from all the commenting sounds like

this story pathetically retarded ......................... i'm not gonna bother

reading now ....... i'll place story favorite : when i've make time i'll read ........

most likely i'll remove after reading : especially from what everybody

talking about this story

Hot but needs a little work

I love all the daddy daughter sex stories

Barely even fair.

Perhaps go off and take a writing course before submitting again.

It sounds like it was written by a 12 yr old. And according to the ages, "Daddy" was 15 when she was born. What a waste of time. This writer goes on my list of "Never read their stories again".

Loved daddy fucking his teenage daughter, but, had the same problem others had, with daddy being 15 when she was born. Other than that, great 1st story. Hope there is more

sorry not sorry, but this wasn't good. The father was 15 when he had her? would of been a lit bit more believable if he was like 45 to 50 years old, but 33, nope. Need to brush up a little bit more on the writing..

I don't know why all people are confused that the father is 15. I know a young father he was 16 when he became a father and I don't see a problem. Great story but one thing I didn't like. It went from 0 to 100 in two sentences haha. Maybe a slower approach next time? Thanks!

knocked up mom at 15 (do-able), but salt & pepper hair at 33? Was there a type-o in the age, when it was entered? I can see that at 43.

it was so unrealistic. no build up. lucky i still came

Wow