All Comments on 'Daddy Issues'

I fell off the bus in the opening paragraph, when you expect the reader to believe a new hire would be told something like that during orientation for a new job. Patently ridiculous, and I decided not to waste any more time at that point.

Lovely and, however unrealistic, had me hooked till the final orgasm.

Incredibly hot and the bits of humor really added to the characters' dynamic. Thanks for sharing!