All Comments on 'Daddy/Master'

This is so fucking hot I wish I was Daddy's little slut and His son's mommy!!! My cunt is soaking wet now! I so need those three cocks now and to be seen by others being such a slut for my Daddy's cock and His boys too omg!

This is so poor, so silly I wonder why it isn't under humor, I can only guess that Mom was a suicide, given the what I read here.

thank you everyone who read this story and liked it. but if your going to comment on the story please have some real citicism so i can work on my writing. thank you. and thank you to thoses that commented and really liked my story, :)

Needs details. Show don't tell. Give us more meat.

I need more. Good job.