All Comments on 'Daddy Next Door'

As a middle aged married man, this is my ultimate fantasy. Great job!!!!

Oh my gosh that was great!!!!! Talk about cockhardening. I've a 21/o daughter and Most of her friends are drop dead beautiful. VERY hard not to look and wonder.......... If any of then gave me an iota of a hint of interest I'd .......... No idea what I'd do. Short but good development. Incredible sex scene. Every married man's dream /nightmare. Possibility of another chapter?

3 stars

DragonRider55

This Dom Daddy loved that story

Ok, that was HOT as Hell! Brought back memories on being the neighbor of beautiful young ladies in the past. Watching them grow into luscious young females of legal age, and wanting them so bad but never having them. Thanks for the memories! Five Stars.

Usually it’s the horny husband aching for a shot at the young neighbor girl. Instead, this was her conquest and well-delivered. Thanks. I’ve never had an enticing neighbor. This story will inspire my imagination. Keep writing.

Really want another addition...I think they should meet up again....and go further!

And then......get caught by the wife! :)

That would be interesting for sure. Good story!!

Couldn't get past the slow start about a narcisistic 18 yo girl.

What colour is her hair? Sand comes in many shades from white to red. Like saying the colour of timber.

The sex scenes were very good, not over the top and I found them very arousing. Thanks for taking the time.

It's almost impossible to make it through this story without coming! when I was in my early forties I was seduced by an incredibly sexy and naughty teenage girl. This story brings back those memories of the hottest sex I've ever had. I need another Olivia!

This story definitely needs more chapters please

WTF? She has 30B breast size? That's a little bitty titty on a little girl! When you write about a full grown woman, I'll read it.

I loved this. It's supposed to be fantasy porn, not Proust. I'm going to read this again and learn from your pace and style. Thanks.

I loved the nice pacing of the story. I loved her determined seduction of Mr. Hoyt. And I am sure that his head will be laying on her pillow as she wants. Pregnant maybe? HMMMMM, not a bad thought for the next story about these two neighbors!!!

JEEEEZ! For consensual sex, that was freakin ahmazing!

Good job of working in some character development in a short piece. Keep writing!

Enjoyed it all.part two please.

LETS GOOOOOOOO!!!!! This story was amazing and right up my alley. I love to dream of finding a sexy older man like Mr. Hoyt for a young submissive girl like me ♥️ Awesome work.

I completely concur with the brilliant, beautiful and wonderful observation above about Olivia eventually becoming pregnant with David's child (perhaps even planned by her in secret, to fully and finally drive stupid Alexa away. I also agree with the comment that there MUST be a Chapter Two. And Three. And Four. And Five, ultimately leading to Olivia and David marrying, with Olivia becoming a cruel and embarrassing step-mother to David's older daughter.

THANK YOU FOR THIS JOY!!!

This is kinda weird. I wrote a story right before you with almost the same title, same these, main girl also named Olivia… what are the chances?

Very much enjoyed it! Part 2 coming soon I hope?

Great story! Io m confused by one thing. She is in her car driving home at the end but it's said he lives right next door? Apologise if l missed something

Her narcissism was over the top, and the slut talk put me right off. Could have done without it. When did everyone start having seizures during sex? So much eyes rolling to the back of heads. It's so overused I wonder if anyone knows what it means.