All Comments on 'Daddy, Please Undress Me Ch. 04'

I have been waiting for more on this story for ever! You don't know how much I used to tease my own Dad and my friend's fathers. All my friends did and we used to joke about it, talking about who's father tried to get a better peek.

Please keep writing on this story.

I hope you won't wait this long to write another instllment on this one PBP. You made us wait TOO long for this one. Every day I look for something new from you. Don't make me wait. Please!

did I mention hot, well I meant steaming hot. I'll try to read back thru' the other chapters. Well done.

WOW ! Your story almost knocked my socks off .

You write your story from the enjoyment of the reader. You have an ability to draw the story out with many descriptive

events.

More! Your writing is enthralling. And the rest of the writers you give them that shot of in the arm. To pull out old stories line. To begin new territories. Thank you for the launch I have needed.

L~

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it is real soon.

I don't know where to start this. I read stories here when I can and this morning I saw this one. I read all the parts and I'll tell you that with a few changes, it could have been my personal story about my life. I have always loved my father, not only as my Dad, but I've also wanted him as a man. I used to do things so he would see how grown up I was and made sure he saw me undressed as much as possible. I loved it when he would come in my room and talk to me when I was getting dressed. I wanted him to want me so much! your story brought all that back. Thank you, who ever you are. I wonder if my father ever smelled my panties?

Now here is a story that makes me want to ask my Daddy to undress me. But I'll have to wait until he gets home from work. I did call him and told him he better stop and get condoms on his way home.

Your gift is my present. I love your approach with just enough mystery, taboo, and hot sex to to take me over the top again! Can't wait for #5.

The naked girl friend watching should really be interesting.

It's just like you to build up a need and then when it looks like you're not going to get to it, WHAM! Love when you do that! Awesome story. Again!

so hot..please continue this story soon...i'm going to read all of your other stories now and try to not cum till i'm finished

amazing story -- please publish another chapter

sensuous erotica...

and am quivering with anticipation for the next chapter.

Thank you.

you dirty bugger i loved your story i hope you keep writting you have talent.

This is hot! I was holding off for chapter five to have an even bigger cum, but I couldn't. Get to writing chapter five pronto!

PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER & THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP. THIS COULD ROLL FOR A WHILE!

HOT! HOT! HOT!

wow i just can't keep my fingers out of my pussy, that was delicious!

Can't wait for chapter 5, it promises to be a doozy! You have talent, go go go!

PLEASE continue this story! you can't leave it hanging where it is!Having the two girls involved would be great!

Will we ever get to hear the rest of the story

Really hot! But we need to hear chapter 5!

o my god. i have spent all night reading stories and touching my pussy, but yours was incredible. I can't wait to hear the end of it. I wish I was Kissy in this story.

I have been reading stories for the past several hours and this is one of the best I have read ever. I can't wait until ch. 5.

This is the hottest story I have ever read. I role play this with my phone sex gf. OMG this is so hot. Thanks. Can't wait to get the next chapter.

This is a great story. Got me so excited. I cannot wait for chapter 5.

Can't wait for #5. These first four just set the table for #5. I can't tell you all of the different fantasies that "came" up Whew

Hot, Hot, Hot! Chapter 5, Please!

Wow....as a Daddy's girl, myself, I am impressed at this whole series. Can't wait for chapter 5.

Can't wait till Ch. 05

So hot!! Want Chapter 5 so I can see if Beth enjoys Daddy too.

Daddies going to be fucking both of them as much as possible while the girls will gang up on him & give him simultaneous head and one will sit on his face while the other one will ride him to orgasm, high speed fucking going on here!

This site for some reason only allow one comment on stories, just wanted to follow up on your story, A fantasy weekend. Both in A Mothers Promise and A Fantasy Weekend, over, and over you stress respect and comfort and admiration for the male, by the female lead......then in fantasy weekend, in the last few paragraphs you f'ked the whole story up with an unknown male, like from the local fast food joint??? or what? I was so impressed with A Mothers Promise and A Fantasy Weekend until you lost your mind.....LOL perhaps you should stick to loving panties and just forget characters with any love and respect!!!!!!!

Please let us know as soon the rest of the chapters are finished. I can see them all living together and having babies.

please more chapters. very good story.

Where is CH 5 ?, can't just leave it hanging there, loved your story so far but this sucks!!!!!

Maybe the author kicked the bucket. lol

chapter 5 please

Why does it have to stop now? Please oh please hurry.

Finish this story! God, it pisses me of when authors do this.

Where's the next chapter?

Absolutely loved each Chapter, gave all of them 5 stars, but at the end. Of Chapter 4 you said " continued in Chapter 5, SO WHERE THE FUCK IS IT. ??? Just kidding, lol, but i really do hope you'll write Chapter 5. Will wait with baited breath

I've been reading literotic for years and years. this is the hottest

story I've ever read. looking for chapter 5..i gave it a 5 star rating

WHERE IS CHAPTER FIVE...PLEASE ...PLEASE WRITE FIVE

Illiterate and talentless. The worst !

Love the story. Always had a thing for taboo relationships. Please post chapter 5 soon.

Oh if only my daughter had let me see her in her panties and then take them off!!!

5's from me. Really want to see what happens next. There's so much possibility: Daddy shaving Chrissy's pussy with Beth naked and watching and maybe helping wipe off the shave cream with a warm washcloth, all caught on camera. Shopping with Daddy, choosing Chrissy's exhibitionist clothes. Daddy also choosing clothes for Beth after she promises to follow his rules. Both girls displaying themselves on the same shopping trip, while Daddy films them both from a distance, with plenty of zoom closeups. Beth watching (and maybe helping) as Daddy introduces Crissy to the joys of intercourse, while Beth catches it all on camera. All three reliving it together over and over by watching the videos as they cuddle on his bed. Beth asking for his cock as Chrissy films them. Daddy teaching them to finger each other's rosebud when their orgasms approach. Chrissy asking Daddy for her first anal (she did say the nastier the better). Chrissy and Daddy sharing his bed every day, with Chrissy going for his morning wood. Beth moving in with them. Chrissy calling herself his woman, especially to her mother and her ex-boyfriend. Perhaps even Chrissy deciding she wants to have his baby (which would be legal since they're not related by blood). Chrissy flaunting her baby bump in front of her mother. The change in Chrissy's breasts due to pregnancy. SO much possibility!

nice story but I'm waiting for the next chapter

Great story, looking forward to ch 5!