All Comments on 'Daddy’s Little Helper'

Just whoring

hope the next one is black!!

It’s sex but not sexy.

...or length to this.

Hotter if the asscociate turned up in dress pants and silk boxers.

Author here. Thank you to everyone who read and liked my story. To those that didn’t, there’s no need to write unhelpful comments. I’m doing the best I can, I’m not a professional writer after all. I welcome constructive criticism anytime.

The story and subject is better than the writing but I am looking forward to more!

Any insights on how I can improve the writing? I would like to be a better writer, if I could have written this better, I would have. I’m always looking for useful constructive criticism .