by andtheend
Can't wait to hear how the rest of your day went.
Wow!
This was a hot story. Just as I got over one part of it, you surprised me with something else. I never expected your daughter's friend to blow you.
You surprised me with your sister-in-law sucking your cock. Then, I never thought you'd mother-in-law would get naked and blow you, too.
Is there a sequel?
Just what the previous posted wrote, what's he going to do with the rest of his day?
I love your stories. I love how you tell a story. I've read all your stories. I'm a big fan.
loved it! I really do hope you dont decide to just let the day end already! so much potential for just a SINGLE DAY!!!
I had a lot of fun to read this story. Very well done, keep on writing.
Thank you one and all for reading, voting, and commenting on my story. I had fun writing it.
I really liked this story. The reactions of seeing Henry naked was very interesting. I really hope he celebrates again next year. Maybe go to Bali.
Keep up the great work!
You had sex with your mother-in-law? Don't worry you could bring her over to India while you're working on my book - it's legal over here!
FYI One America Dollar is equal to approximately 46.4851 Indian Rupees.
Which means that at 50 Rupees per 1000 words you would be receiving over ONE DOLLAR per 1000 words and almost FOUR DOLLARS per LITEROTICA page. Which dear sir is a lot of money in my country!
And I’d still have to pay to have it translated into Hindi! Would you consider 20 Rupees per 1000 words?
Raajeev
I'm not in your country and $4.00 will only buy me a cup of coffee and two donuts.
Maybe if your threw in your sister, we could have a deal, RaaJeev.
Yet, another good story, Andtheend. You are a writing machine.
Good job with this one. It was a hot one. I loved it.
You remind me someone trying on perfume.
This scent is not my favorite...
This one is too light...
This one doesn't smell good on me at all...
And more and more they keep layering it on, hoping to find one that works, but alas, after all the testing they smell like a SKUNK from the horrid combination. That's you submitting so many stories. They all STINK and piling funk on top of funk is not going to turn into roses!
to early in the day for this story to end. maybe he can take control of his wife and daughter oe have the wife watch with some of the others
I was a little put off by a lot of negativity. But the serendipity was very arousing. Go on, though I'd like more focus on the positive, less on the main character's apparent sociopathy...
The same people post to defend her/him/them/it. It's because they are all ALTS. The author is an alt, WMForrester is an alt, BarbieBunny is an alt, CarBuffStuff is an alt, SimonCowell is an alt, PositiveThinker is an alt, and so on and so forth. The person holding the strings is the mentally deranged and literary-challenged Freddie a.k.a. Bostonfictionwriter. The story is crap because Freddie writes crap. The comments are too pathetic and sad to be funny, but they illustrate the absolute lack of talent or SANITY of the author.
The time has come for Laurel and Manu to do something about the lunatics who ruin the site, the forums and the contests for everyone else. PLEASE site owners, get rid of:
bostonfictionwriter and all of his alts
scouries and all of his alts
sarahhh (I think she's actually an alt of scouries') and all of her alts
I realize that when you count up all their alts, it will reduce site membership by at least 5%, but please consider the absolute breath of fresh air the rest of the members and contributors will be able to breathe without their bullshit stinking up the place!
Your 'avante guard' writing lifestyle suits a continuing interest to CFNM research. Do you need reference material, or can your imagination handle an 'experienced' practical instruction, from a foreign based devotee couple?
WE will recommend; 'The Life and CFNM times of Herbert Smith' series by another prolific 'literotica' devotee under cfchris.
I must say, I enjoyed your kind of humor nearly even more than the story :) Is there any place I can read more stories of yours, not necessarily pornographic even?
But I did... and I am sure that many others out there do so as well. Excellent writing and a fun story. Not terribly erotic, but hey.. is totally in the spirit of Nude Day!! Thank you.
This is one of the best stories I've read here. Well put together!
very very good ,it was funny and sexy at the same time,please do a follow up
This was a really unique story on Literotica. I really enjoyed it. As someone who is "bi", it would have been even better if Mark came inside the house after all the women left and you both sucked each other's cocks. Sucking a cock and swallowing Mak's cum would have been a great way to end the story after your mother-in-law ate your cum. Any way, I still gave your story a 5 rating.
Good story but the old mother in the law ruined it. No one wants to hear about an old lady with saggy tits.
The only way I would have enjoyed it more was if the two prudes were taught a lesson by all the non-prudes. ;P
Really enjoyed your story mainly because my wife and I are naked in and around our house all the time. We agreed to this lifestyle when we first got married and over the years have convinced many of our friends to join us. In our case even our daughter and her friends join in. I'm always amazed that so many women love to be naked and how many love to suck cock. Here, anything goes as long as it's consensual. We have many visitors who agree. Bare469