All Comments on 'Daddy was Waiting'

Very well written... you definitely should continue the story.

Nice, wouldn’t mind a sequel.

This is a great first story. The dialogue was good and the father was well written. I hope to see more of your work.

Thanks for all the feedback, so pleased to see people liked it! I am working on part 2 so stay tuned.

And I'll try to remember the floor v ground thing since that clearly ruins the entire work ;)

Lying on the FLOOR in a house is NOT on the GROUND.....

I think Daddy's little girl got off a little too easy with just those two light slaps to her face, so hopefully she begs for a proper punishment in the next chapter. Definitely looking forward to more daughter discipline and humiliation, her body seems primed to handle all the loving abuse coming her way! :)

So friggin hot! Was expecting a spanking and fuck. This is so much hotter, mind games with bad Dawter. Hope there's more to follow. Five Stars!

This story has got to be my absolute favorite so far, & I've been here for months. I can see this story, as Chapter 1. Can hardly wait to read the next one.

This is just how a daddy should take care of his baby girl...can't wait for the next chapter!

Was hoping dad would find a pussy filled with the seed of a young stud. Maybe next time? Hope you continue with this story.

Keep going. Good writing good story.