All Comments on 'Daddy Writes Erotica'

<p>Very exciting story, man! I hope to see the continuation of it soon!!!</p>

<p>On a purely technical note, however, I'd suggest that you pay just a little more attention to spelling and editorial errors- there's a number of small, subtle mistakes which kind of detracted from the story as my mind tried to decipher what you'd meant to say/type. Punctuation, specifically, needs a seriously going-over.</p>

<p>Anyway... keep this one alive, please!</p>

Good lord, lose the exclamtion points. And why the hell is it so hard for authors on this site to keep telling the story in the same person? you start off in the third person, talking about Patti, then switch it to first person, having Patti tell the story. Don't you read your stories when you're done?

i love it so much. i have read a lot of stories but this is by far the best.

oh godddddddddd...very very hotttttttttttt...You are a very talented writer Daddy and one that makes me wettttttttttt everytime i read a stroy from You...

Your little girl

patti...giggles

more please!

Great story! Love the fact that she is seducing him, even though you know he wants it...

What's with the random hyphenation? One hour, two hours. 1 hour, 2 hours. Not fucking two-hours.

great story cant wait to read more

i'm a young bigirl. and this story paralels something that happened to my sister, our daddy and our story (as yet untold) almost exactly. we loved it. and i'm sure our daddy will too. omg, the sexing wil be extra hot tonight. thank you

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Very good.

"1*" !

This is so very titillating...I hope I can find the next part!! Thanks for writing it.

Ok, this is the second story of yours that I've dug into now, I'm addicted! You are my new favorite author!! Hehehe :) ...as I was getting to the bottom of the page I kept thinking 'please let there be another chapter, please let there be another chapter, YES!!!'. heh.

Hey, mister vile-critic, if you are going to viSit this site and drop nasty comments, don't hide behind "anonymous". Give yourself a name, so we can snark back at you!

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