All Comments on 'Daddy's Candy'

by Lily_Weidner

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot - Awesome!

My favorite already.

EosAuroraEosAuroraover 8 years ago
Not there yet

Need more build up to thier relationship, it's just so abrupt. The sex is hot though.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
Not bad

but too quick, needed more background (like where's mom?)

Good for a quick jerk-off story

finegoldwinefinegoldwineover 8 years ago
Where's the rest?

For the rest if the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I agree with the other comments, the story could benefit from more characterization about their relationship. Whys the daughter so ready to assume her daddy's wants her? Where's Mom, and danger she'll pop in the door and catch them? added suspense & tension if so. What comes next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
weak

nothing imaginative or fresh

no real plot, about as flat line as one can get

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice One

You made me hard thinking about that tight slutty daughter getting what she needed. GREAT STORY!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it!

Just what I needed to get off. Thank you xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I love when my daddy tie's me up a does me to no end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good

Want my dad to put his cock in me like that

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