All Comments on 'Daddy's Cum Pt. 01'

You have to finish this story quickly! It's not fair that you stopped in the middle of it...

Great start to your story! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing!

Please continue this story. I like it. :)

Wow love the very hot story. I hope you write part 02 soon.

Great storytelling, great characters and build up! The only reason for the 4 stars was the short length. Please finish this story soon, nothing like hanging on the edge!

Thank you for sharing your talent!

PLEASE write more ASAP! I’m waiting!!!! 😍😍😍 SO HOT!!

Perfect.... !!!! Got me good and hard, waiting for more

Nice Start. Please keep going.

Oh what a start to this series, well I hope it is a series. Plenty of scope for some great sex.

Can't wait to read more from you... thank you!

I adore the switching viewpoints idea, it works really well. As a Rachael myself, I cannot wait to see how this entertaining tale develops, XX

They seem to be a mismatched couple. Sadly.

Stupid slut Rachel runs to Shane who cant get her off yet daddy is home

I like the girls very young and curious about dad`s

cock !