All Comments on 'Daddy's Guilt'

ew omg not hot at all

The story makes little sense, first you say he has an old ancient wrinkled face but then you say he has an athletic body and you never say why she doesnt get to keep the children.

It was a good plot initially, but seemed like you were in a hurry and needed to end the story fast. It was so fast that ended tasteless and got me deceived on a good initial idea. Keep those ideas up and take your time for the story to evolve, develop in your mind and then you may start writing. You should enjoy writing ;)

Revolting.

Also, the father character in the story should be strung up by his testicles, and left to rot.

Sick, just plain sick.

Needs more description, but beautiful concept. I loved it. Please write more!

it began so benignly. slowly sucking me into the story, until it changed suddenly.

I just couldn't stop reading. It was just so ....horrible.

Half sort of hot, half a train wreck you can not look away from. I did enjoy reading it but my first reaction after is: 'phew it was just a dream... none of it is real...it wasn't happening me'

good job.

A true story

Odd choice of adjectives that didn't fit with the story(which in itself is very short). It needs editing due to grammatical problems.

Who wants this?

too rushed, no build up but the story idea was good.

If this really is a true story, I pray that you find a way to get out of this arrangement. A father should protect their child. And while it's all fun and games when we talk about these types of scenarios in a fictional light, consent should always be the main factor in real life sexual occurrences. I really, truly hope that you are doing well, and come to realize you deserve so much more than this <3

it had the possibility to be good but the plot developed way too fast. 3 stars

I wish I had been my fathers whore. I wish my father had sold my virginity to someone for money, I wish he had me tied up so I couldn’t leave until he was finished and my virgin holes had all been filled. Then I wish he trained me to properly please a man and pimped me out.

someone probably likes it, but that's the grossest thing I have ever read. glad it was short i would never have finished it if not i expected a twist or some kind of redemption but ewww

That was the worst story ever. The money isn't worth it with what she went through.

Her daddy deserves to lose his job and she needs to pack and leave and never look back. Both him and his boss deserve to be shot.

It's average but keep writing about your stories and make it more sexy and how the man have a big black cock. Of 15 or more cock.

Bloody awful. I couldnt finish it