by CheyenneRayne
I'd say no to the breeding. Given life as it is for them at the moment, do they even want a kid, let alone does he want to sire his own grandchild?
Let daddy breed his little girl. If I had a daddy like him we wouldn’t leave the bedroom. Please update this story.
Please do not go the baby route. I do not understand how anyone finds that hot. If you do go that route please put a warning so those who don't like birth defects are able to avoid stories with fathers and daughters or mothers and sons having babies together.
The build up and story are entertaining without a pregnancy thrown into the mix.
The concept of this story is only slightly redundant. I mean, for a Lit crowd it could be said to be cliche really. But other than the usual nitpicks of check your spelling, this was a nice, quick read. I would definitely recommend this for any one who is new to this genre. It was tasteful and easy to follow. I hope you do continue this story. Just a suggestion, maybe have the daughter invite a cousin or close friend Dad has salivated over for a while join the fun for Dad's birthday? Save the breeding for chapter 3. Just my opinion. Keep up the good work and good luck!!!!