All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Fuck Doll'

by BouncyBabyGirl

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Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 5 years ago
You’ve been “groomed”?

So, a parental child molester waited until an 18th Bday and all is OK?

This is sick shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Childish...........

garbage.

bigjimbroni65bigjimbroni65over 5 years ago
This girl turned 18 but...

you make her seem like she has the mentality of a 10 year old. Plus, She has to wake HIM up? It's her birthday He should've been her present Sorry. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Keep up the good work, 5 stars

I love this story of domination, in fact that’s the tag I was searching for and that’s how I got here. I cant wait to hear the rest. I love the fact that Baby Girl is willing to do everything for Daddy. That’s what submissive little girls do best.

Don’t listen to the haters here, they’re just jealous they could never have a bouncy Baby Girl like you. 5 stars and looking forward to the next part

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 5 years ago
Five!

Loved the pussy spurt at the end. You write incest/taboo well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Terrible — Tehehe

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please more

Please more, like is daddy gonna breed his daughter? Does his sister her aunt come into the picture?

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
Fuck

He needs to fuck her and eventually breed her

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 5 years ago
don't

know why people are raving about this unfinished story

Slithy2013Slithy2013over 5 years ago
18?

Is she supposed to be 18 or 8?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mmm good start!

Can't wait to hear of her thoughts when she first feels that hugh cock pushing against her lips and slipping deeper and deeper into her little pussy. Let's hear more soon, please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Gimme

I want some of daddy's secret sauce too

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ther better be a part 2

... there better be a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So hot!!

My god where can I find part two?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
5 stars

Great start Bouncy, I can’t wait to read more. I hope Daddy gives you everything you desire and deserve

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It's not too bad but daughter can't be sounding sexy but also naive about fucking.

HiddenToasterHiddenToasteralmost 3 years ago

The way she talks is just a turn off, the story feels like it's just a pedophilic story through and through.

DarlingKDarlingKover 1 year ago

I love the naive, innocent little girl talk. I think it's cute and sexy and makes the concept all the more dirty and depraved. Yes!!

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Hiya! My name's BouncyBabyGirl, and I'm a 20-something yr old female in a long term poly relationship with my dom couple, Mr. Steel and Jenni Lane. This is my first time writing erotica, and oh boy oh boy, I am having soooo much fun! And from the looks of things...so are YOU...