All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

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Jasont200Jasont200over 7 years ago
great story

I can't wait to read what happens on Wednesday ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Daddy..

Daddy.

biheather4u6969biheather4u6969over 7 years ago
hmmmmmmm-wow

Such a hot awesome story. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Also, how about a more detailed description of Gabby and daddy? hmmmmmmmmmmmm. I came 3 times while reading.

charliebillcharliebillover 7 years ago
True love story

How could they not fall in love? Now for the next steps!!

aAmour1964aAmour1964over 7 years ago
tender

lovely and sweet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I like the softness of it...every now and then the writing gets so clunky, in a way that's distracting and disconcerting. Words like "pussy" and "cum" feel...teenager-ish, trite, too easy, too boyish, vapid, annoying really. I should write my own things, I have such high standards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It Is About Time!

Thank you for not having a virgin story include a misplaced hymen! You get full stars for that fact alone!

I will never understand where the myth of an internal sack of blood or fluid derived from, but it is so ridiculous to see it perpetuated. If a person doesn't know enough about their anatomy or the anatomy of their characters it would be best to learn about the subject. The internet has many diagrams and charts showing the extra thick skin which is at the entrance and serving the purpose of keeping things from entering. You described the feeling caused by the ripping or tearing of such sensitive skin perfectly.

I can not wait to enjoy more of your stories!

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uover 7 years ago

Great story. Makes me wish I had a daughter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fuck

Holy shit this story was fucking amazing I literally cried like I was turned on but at the same time I literally felt their conflict and pain and shit it was too real 😍😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hot

That made me so hornyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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