All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

Easily the biggest load of juvenile rubbish ever published on Lit. Get on with your homework!

The cliche, trite, overused was a bad sign.

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As for the story itself? The single worst is that quotation marks are NOT optional! A 10 year old child should know this.

So sexy, cant wait for a pt 2, bring it on!! I came so hard!

Please keep writing maybe a part 2 soon please

Very obviously written by a dude

Maybe try to learn how to write before posting a story.

Quotation mark etc. Like seriously