All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl Ch. 01'

Wow!

Great start. I can't wait for more

I really think you've done an excellent job in how well you've conveyed Micks thoughts, and a lovely balance between realism and fantasy means this was a pleasure to read.

Great start and I can't wait to see where you go with it .Good luck and keep writing ....

Be a bugger if she got pregnant !

Loved this, can't wait to read about her downing that smoothie. I second what the first comment says... be pretty funny/hot if she got pregnant and has no idea what happened. Be just like when I played with my drunk daddy one night and it got me pregnant... When I told him he was pretty pissed and wanted to kill the guy I had a one night stand with... of course he had no idea the guy he wanted to kill was himself :$ lol

Got mY cock nice and hard reading it.

Got my pussy wet... I was rubbing on it practically whhile reading the story cant wait for the next chapter

AMAZING HOW THE WRITTEN WORD CAN GET ONE SO HOT AND SO WET. I HOPE YOU ARE WORKING ON THE NEXT INSTALMENT!

Great story cant wait for more

I hope you keep writing! This Daddy's girl is waiting for more! ;)

This father has the mentality of a rapist! On the one hand she is innocent, but on the other hand she deserves to get a cum deposit in her smoothie! By the way, smoothies have to be made fresh or they lose their nutritional value! But your grammar wasn't bad!

This story is a good start to a series. She must soon give herself to her Daddy. He has to fill her with his seed and give her at least one baby.