by Lady Malachite
This story is probably mis-categorized under romance. I would have put it in the humor category. Anyway, I found it both amusing and hot.
This is, without doubt, your best work yet. It has everything a reader could wish for. It's sensitive, sensuous, amusing, and highly "arousing". Who could possibly ask for more?
Thankyou,
Brian. (UK)
Had me on my toes until the end, wondering what devilish thing she would think up next!
Great work!
Maharat
THIS WAS A TERRIFIC STORY. I LOVED IT AND WAS WAITING TO SEE WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. UNTIL I GOT TO THE END. WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY????????
definitely need another chapter. continue with the date with exquisite details about the hot sex after or just making out.....looking forward to it!!!!!!!!
......in the bad writing contest
Rarely have I encountered such a load of old bollocks!
Sorry couldn't even start to like the boss or Anyone in his family. Found this story to be mostly about using and manipulation. There was no romance in this story. I do not believe she loves him at all.
I can't believe I made my way through the whole thing even if i mostly skimmed it. It wasn't worth the time, that's for sure. And I won't spend any time on the comment. 2*