All Comments on 'Daddy's New Fucktoy'

Abusing your drunk daughter is not at all erotic. I gave you three stars as I like your writing style.

This would have been much better if there was a seduction and then a decision to cross that taboo line.

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This is so fucking hot. Please continue this

Came so fucking hard wishing he was my Daddy... more please!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this story. I have soft spot for father daughter incest. I hope that you write another chapter soon.

I have been reading stories on here since the early 2000's.

This is the first I have ever rated and commented I n.

That was terrible, way too much daddy this, Daddy that. No father calls himself Daddy when talking to a daughter of that age, no matter what they are doing.

Ive never cum from reading just one story.... until now. Amazingly hot!

I loved it. Very hot. Don't listen to the haters.

I welcome and appreciate all comments and criticism. More stories on the way for all those who gave me ❤. xo Mary

Please keep this going. Daddy has 2 young fuck toys now. Sounds like a cunt buffet to eat and fuck at will

The story was definitely hot. I found the use of the word "daddy" over-done. You can use "he" every now and then, it would have the same effect. One other thing was that he claims her for his private fuck toy then asks her if she's going to fuck who he tells her to. That's a little bit contradictory. Otherwise, a good story

This story was so fuxking hot. I came so hard, Im still trembling. Is there a threesome follow up wirh Rose. That would be amazing.