by larkholt
Ergh.I totally agree with the last two comments, there's no love anymore from the father, tbh George's actions and the fathers thoughts utterly disgusted me... Other parts of the story was ok, but this last chapter gets 1/2 star, and a note to self to never read again...
Not a fan, totally self indulgent. Looks like he wants to turn daughter into whore for his pleasure. Glad it ended
Ugh. Unlike others here I'm glad you stopped. You turned Emily from a loyal loving slut to a fucking stupid slut. The only person the Dad loves is himself.
Well, too bad the story ends here. It would have been fun to find out just how far Emily is going to go down this path of slutdom with her daddy. Will she get pregnant or will daddy take care of her? She is still only 18 but when will she finally realize that she has no life except as a fucktoy for her father? Will he take her out to sex clubs, gloryholes, frat parties, sorority parties, homeless/immigrant camps for a few days, or ???
OK. I'm ready for the next part, please. Daddy and George need it too. Emily needs to go to DP heaven.
This was so amazingly hot! My Daddy read it and now when he wants to play he now calls me BabySlut! Next chapter please
I wish my father used me like a slut and a fucktoy!!!! My cunt needs to be abused and I’m a cock hungry whore who needs to be punished.
Please continue these rule. Maybe one with 2 or 3 older guys, uncle and they old dude with daddy and his girl? Please. Me and my girl love them.
Please write another one. Preferably with Daddy and another older guy. Maybe an uncle or just the older guy.
This is what you should probably have said . Howling with pleasure, he filled his baby girl's thirsty cunt knowing more deliciously perverted times were ahead for them both including the son or daughter he might have just got his slutty daughter Emily pregnant with
Needs to continue, want to read about. Her and George funding in front of Dad. Several other people in Vegas.
I would love a continuation of this story! I get so wet reading about this Daddy taking charge of his little slut, and now the possibility of him allowing others to use her. Damn.
Story was interesting but could have back on some of the harsh punishment. Keeping writing and I will keep reading.
EMILY THE DESPERATE IMMATURE GREEDY BITCH WHO HAD TO HAVE GEORGE GET HIS WAY!! SLUT
OK, I'm going to be different from the other posters I've read. I started skipping part due to my dissatisfaction & wound up one part as Emily's father's whipping her ass with a belt. I need read no more. Neither will I search for any of your other stories. Everyone's entitled to their opinion. Mine, this's just bad.
Please please continue this! My pussy is throbbing reading this, do fucking wet and hot 🥵
Please continue this!! I know it's been years but please or at least someone continue this
Still holding out hope that you’ll return to this one day. Dying to see how Emily handles two dirty old men.
Hopefully you will be able to finish the story. There are several options that are possible to finishing the story. Maybe you can write several different endings? I like stories that have several different finishes instead of just one. Usually some stories just stop without any endings. It seems surprising that her daddy even was able to go to some meetings without being so exhausted. She can make a lot of money in Vegas while he is at meetings. She could even end up as a painslut in a BDSM setting. Please, write a few endings for her.
Holy shit this series is good. Crazy hot for such short chapters too - most writers can't achieve in 5 pages what you do in under 2. You should seriously consider writing/publishing a collection of these types of stories. I'd buy it
I was really hoping to read Emily finally getting a DP.
Shame that the story stopped here.
I loved this story disappointed I can't send private feedback to the writer. Disappointed also that she doesn't appear to want to continue this as I truly believe she has a real talent for writing . Or maybe she is off developing that talent elsewhere. I do hope she reads this and decides that along with all the other commentators she will be missed.
amazing story and I can't fucking wait for the next part to cum out!
This series is so fucking hot. I've creamed my pants over and over. I really want to read about Emily getting it from both Jake and George. I'd love to see how far Daddy will degrade her.
I crave, no I NEED more! Please can I have more? I loved reading your story and cumming hard. Daddy needs to show her so much more to make her a true fucktoy! Please! I promise to be a good girl and re-read the whole story to my "Daddy". Maybe we will read some things to try.
I loved all of them and just finished this one. I need a part 5!!!
Wonderful plot and very well written! You have a special talent. I believe that this story can have many more chapters as Emily continues her slide to becoming a bigger slut. Hope your fans don't have wait too long for the next installment. Thank you!
This chapter was as great as the others! Please please please put up another chapter soon.
Love this series! Please keep writing on it!!!! I wanna know about Daddy, Baby slut and George!
Omg please write part 5 I can’t handle the waiting 😭 This story is so hot if my Daddy fucked me like that I don’t think I could resist either.
1st I've read of this series. Going to read the others now. Well done. 4 stars
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