All Comments on 'Daddy's Perfect Little Angel'

Loved your story, so sexy and beautiful.

Definitely 5 *****

I thought it sucked, and not in a good way. You used a generic writing style and it showed. I stopped reading as soon as the daughter began speaking because it’s obvious you’re still learning to write. She was wooden and robotic. Nothing set her apart from the many other characters from similar stories. 2 stars because at least you tried.

disturbingly stupid............ not worth the time you will never get back.

Well i can tell you i thought it was awesome . Looks like we have some one who is not into a beautiful

story. they are called KAREN'S . Act better than thaw know it all.

Great story.