All Comments on 'Daddy's Princess Makes Her Place'

by dannythebaltimoron

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prop69prop69about 6 years ago
Story of love and lust

Do you plan a follow-up?

dannythebaltimorondannythebaltimoronabout 6 years agoAuthor
RE: Story of love and lust

Yes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Did we read the same story?

Needs work and an editor. Maybe wait a day then proofread or reread your story. First she needs to lose weight then she has an athletic body. You make it seem like the poor mother did everything to get him started and he repays her by cheating then incest she knew of and drank because of it. This little psychopath should rot in jail with her fucked up father. Not remotely erotic. He also is. It entering her womb or her mound. Not sure what kissing him had to do with her cunt being wet all day and everything that came after it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Maybe after being released from prison, because she's a felon and lost almost all of her money, the wife is desperate enough that she starts living as her husband and daughters' servant and has to clean up after them

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