by Larkfield61
The storyline of Sian wanting her dad to impregnate her is inconsistent with Harry saying in chapter two that he had a vasectomy when his daughters were young.
Thank you for your comment, obviously l have made a glaring error, my only excuse is that l am very new to this and l ask for your indulgence. I will endeavour to be more careful in future.
I was going to comment on the vasectomy issue but see someone else already did. When can we expect the next chapter? Soon I hope!! Great story so far!