All Comments on 'Daddy's Special Baby'

by NaughtyStorytellerforyou98

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aoSolitude1964aoSolitude1964almost 6 years ago
Short n sweet

Intense and lovely...

Please write more, more like this.

Thank you!

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgiralmost 6 years ago

I must be one of those people who is a pussy, and not in the good way.

To insult your readers when YOU provide them the entertainment, which you choose to do so for free, is bullshit. Why write if your attitude of some people is so low? Don't like the criticism or anonymity that goes along with free sex story sites? Then don't write and don't post here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Horrible

How old is the writer. 10? Seriously childish dialogue. Sex is insipid at best. Please get an editor. And use spell and grammar check. Dad lay down next to the best? (Bear)

Her thong hit the water with a loud splash? Was it made of lead. I guess anybody that doesnt like your stories is a pussy? Well Fuck you.

-10000 stars if possible

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Women don't have "precum". Jesus.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Are you a virgin

Please with the 8" length. 1"width is pencil thin average is almost 2" width women don't pre cum 18 year olds know what a dick is. Just need an editor and learn about sex some more premise of story is good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ok

The story seems to have been written by a 12 yr old that has only dreamed about sex. Other than that, I hope Katie gets pregnant by daddy real quick so they can raise their hopefully daughter into a slut yhat daddy can fuck too!

FloatingdadFloatingdadover 4 years ago
Well done!

Very nice story Naughty! Filled my fantasy nicely, and was a fun ride. Simple story with enough detail without pounding on every little anatomical slit and dribble.

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