by kari_taylor
Is she blonde or brunette? Stick with one.
So many other inconsistencies. Edit with the door open.
How so? I endeavor to be better with each successive story, despite my quirks ;). I need the details on what Iβve wronged with the writing! I took in the hair color. And Iβm glad for the turn on xD! Thatβs the point of course! Itβs all for fun.
The overall story was fantastic as always. I thought the addition and use of the camera was extremely sexy. I'm looking forward to seeing what kinds of positions (or restraints) little Muffin finds herself in next!
So I'm guessing since it's been months since this chapter that there isn't going to be a next one? I can't stand it when there is such a gap between chapters.
Please continue this story and write more daughter dad stories like this. It's such a good one.