All Comments on 'Daddy's Sweet Muffin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Details.

Is she blonde or brunette? Stick with one.

So many other inconsistencies. Edit with the door open.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

My pussy is dripping!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nah

I'm ok with the subject, it's the shitty writing that threw me.

kari_taylorkari_taylorover 5 years agoAuthor
Understood

How so? I endeavor to be better with each successive story, despite my quirks ;). I need the details on what I’ve wronged with the writing! I took in the hair color. And I’m glad for the turn on xD! That’s the point of course! It’s all for fun.

ned_sandersned_sandersover 5 years ago
Great

The overall story was fantastic as always. I thought the addition and use of the camera was extremely sexy. I'm looking forward to seeing what kinds of positions (or restraints) little Muffin finds herself in next!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 5 years ago
No next chapter??

So I'm guessing since it's been months since this chapter that there isn't going to be a next one? I can't stand it when there is such a gap between chapters.

chandu440chandu440almost 2 years ago

Please continue this story and write more daughter dad stories like this. It's such a good one.

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