All Comments on 'Dade Ch. 01'

The Main characters name and that this was a Sci-fi is what made me want to read it but I really like the begining plot and characters. Keep it up. Thanks

hoping to read the next installment soon

Great story, man! Even though its only the beginning but i'm already itching to read the next chapter.

loving it, please continue it!

Well written and seems to have lots of potential. Do you plan to continue this story or will it remain just another fragment?

The last time that I have read this story (many, many months ago), it hooked me big-time. I have been itching for knowing when chapter 2 will come of this story?

All well and good but could do with getting to the point