All Comments on 'Daisy'

Nicely done. Love this. 5 Stars

Naughty and very fun read, right little firecracker. 5 stars well deserved

Lots of sex, for sure. Good luck in the contest.

[30.08.22]

Tres Zpicy HAWT!

77/10!!!!!

5/5. Keep it monogamous for 4 MORE YEARS! Loved this one!

Let’s have chapter 2!

Very hot! loved it.

Definitely a 5 star start! Hope you can add more now that Kent is home!

Great! EXCEPT ... it ended before it really got started. With such a start why did you not add about 12 more pages? Put a little drama into it. Perhaps a bit of jealousy between the brothers, and tension until another sister showed up. And maybe the "Mother" set the whole thing up to begin with? All the hot possibilities that could have been :-)

Clever setup and outstanding delivery!

Hi, S&F, this was hot as summer! I loved the humorous aspects, too, particularly when Mom is explaining the relationship with Great Aunt Myrtle's sister (who would have also been his great aunt unless they were half-sisters, right?) and then on from there. I got a great laugh out of that. I browsed through the other comments since this has been up for a few days before I could get to it and have to agree with JimDiamond that it's quite possible (probable even) that Mom's tired of her sons being bachelors and wants grandbabies before it's too late. Best wishes in the contest but considering how it ended, I'm hoping you decide to continue this for another chapter or 3 after the contest ends. 5*

Oh my god, this was amazing. I really need to know what happens next, with two guys in the house...

Just so you know, being built like a brick shithouse means that one is stocky, muscly and not very attractive, just like a brick outhouse.

Thanks for all your kind comments. And just so YOU know, being `Built Like a Brick Shit House`, when used to describe a woman implies, ` Having to do with a beautiful and curvaceous, or well-built woman.`

Which of course perfectly describes sexy Daisy!

Thanks for this story. It was a fun read. Definitely need to read more of your stories.

some commenter has not heard Brick House.