by TrueNorth1969
Wow! Didn't see that coming! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
You are definitely one of my favorite writers on this site. Just when I think I know where your going with this plot you threw in a twist straight out of left field. Awesome. Keep up the great work.
Where did that come from?! Great twist! This chapter certainly did divulge a lot more in your characters. You're becoming one of my favorite author! So...when is the next chapter? :)
As much as I am intrigued by this story I feel like I have to work too hard to even keep up with all your twists & turns. You are easily my favorite author on this site, however out of all your submissions this one just seems like its "all over the place" all the time. I'll be keeping up with it though to prove myself wrong. =) What can I say you have yet to disappoint.
It's definitely keeping me intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!