All Comments on 'Damaged Goods'

Every one of your stories is gripping. You have quickly become one of my favorite authors. Thanks.

You just raised the quality bar on this site by a tremendous amount. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Well written emotionally charged, great character development, setting and plot development.

Enjoyed reading, thank you.

I usually don’t read longer stories like this....but yours drew me in....had to find out what was going to happen between these two...please please have a chapter 2 soon....,

What a riveting and beautiful story. Full circle, would be a shame not to continue the storyline. Can think of so many directions in the flow of the story.....

Very well written. Well thought out characters and an interesting story line. Thanks

What a good story. You developed the characters and made the readers care about them. I will look forward to more of this story and other stories. Great job!

Loved it and really hope you keep going with this story. I would love to know what happens from here. do they get together as a couple? Married seeing as she was adopted by her foster family and may have their name. Babies, was she on birth control when they made love the first time?

That was WAY beyond great. I was almost in tears near the end. Such a moving story. As the other critic stated a few minor errors but nothing drastic. I dearly would love to read another chapter or 2. I RARELY read stories over 3 pages due to so few being worth reading. Something said read this one and I'm very glad I did. I'm admittedly overeducated so very sparing with with ratings but this rates high.

4 stars

DragonRider55

A great story that needs an editor to fix the spelling and detail mistakes.

But I still give it four out of five. If you had an editor it Wallis have gotten five.

One thing, since I'm a detail oriented asshole: he says he couldn't remember the last time he cried, but wasn't he crying when he was first reunited with her?