All Comments on 'Damien Night Ch. 05'

by AutumnRayven

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angelicbeautyangelicbeautyabout 10 years ago

This is great. It seems like Damien is controlling his emotions so much that he doesn't want to corrupt Anabel. I see them as mates...she puts him on edge so much he is nervous. K can't wait....

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 10 years ago
Welcome back.

I remember reading the first few chapters years ago but I thought you had given upon the story. If you've written it all, why are you stretching it out and only posting once weekly? Just curious.

Looking forward to some closure on this story.

AutumnRayvenAutumnRayvenabout 10 years agoAuthor
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I'm piecing it out because I'm actually not happy with a few scenes and I'm trying to find the time to edit them. It doesn't seem to be happening though :(

LustDominaLustDominaabout 10 years ago
Oooh I was waiting for this!!!

Really nice story!!!! Love the characters, keep up the good work and thank you so much!!

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