- Loving Wives
- Damn If I Know
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All Comments on 'Damn If I Know'
by TizWin
- 57 Comments
C_frommnalmost 13 years agoYou need to let this come to an end and let everyone Including your Character what it was all about
Damn If I Know!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoleaper: one who leaps or jumps.
leper: on afflicted with leperosy.
bruce22almost 13 years agoIf we really listened to what is said in the title, there would be no need to read more. The rationalists will keep up a chorus of Incomplete, Incomplete and I admit that midway through my thought was, "this is great suspense". The many poets if they read prose on here will really feel this one which could be easily transformed into the other genre.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoAnonymous folk who criticise spelling should be really Really Careful that they themselves . . . . .
In Australia, it IS spelled criticise, by the way, but leprosy is the same the world over.
Spellchecked three times,
Yours,
Kilroy.
SELSTIMalmost 13 years agoI know curiosity killed the cat but if I was in that situation I would have to know why or it would drive me crazy. So, if that was your goal, you've succeeded. Nice work
jasonnhalmost 13 years agoWell, she calls him a "sick prick" so that probably means she caught him cheating or looking at porn.
DUH, here's a thought. How about asking a direct question instead of Mickey Mouse games? Damn if anyone knows.
Just because JPB gets away with unfinished stories (sometimes) doesn't mean everyone should try it.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoWhat happens is that you finally start snooping on her and find out you were wrong, and that she has been cheating on you for years.
the Troubadoralmost 13 years agoAll I read was a series of barely connected statements. Sure no story there/
EspressoBolusalmost 13 years agoI assume you mistakenly posted the raw outline for a story. Lots of potential but nothing realized as yet.
LoneStarRideralmost 13 years agoDamn if I know why you bothered to post this directionless drivel.
bigguy323almost 13 years agoIf this is part of a multi-page story, then you should let us know at the end of the page with "to be continued".
As it is, it sucks because it goes no where and does nothing.
BoringOldGuyalmost 13 years agoVery unsatisfying. I do not mind vignettes or flash stories but this one is too glib. There had to be a reason behind her attitude and comment "Well it's about time, you sick prick, and how soon can you be gone?"
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoa great wording of thoughts and concerns and considerations in dealing with shit
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digdaddyrichalmost 13 years agoThe story was a little confussing, and not really finding out what the problem was, 'why she wanted him to ask for a divorce' left the reader a little frustrated.
Perhaps a revisit to his story with the reason his wife wanted him out of her life, would make this first chapter make more complete.
Thanks for the post.
Twosheddzover 11 years agoThere are stories here that beg for more resolution, but this takes the cake.
cantbuymyover 11 years agoYou got the wife down perfectly. And does why really matter? When it is over it is over.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThe actual reason for the sudden actions of a spouse may never be known but as this story clearly indicates eveyone must decide when to end an intolerable stiuation.
More common in the US than you may think.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoFTDS. Is that it; the extent of your literary talent is this, whatever it is. Come on man finish it or don't ever write anything again
EgoTrixiover 9 years ago...did I bother reading this? Were you trying to amuse your readers with a literary joke or something? Damn if I know. But I do know that I found no substance in it. Sorry.
Anonymousover 9 years agoyou got lucky. I would definitely include this in the 10 worst stories on the site.
fifteen16over 9 years agoI do not understand why so many negative comments, maybe it is to realistic so many relationships end in divorce with both parties wondering how they got there. He could not uncover a reason for his wifes attitude so he embarks on a tit for tat approach which simply made a bad situation worse, oh! so real life. There should be more chapters because for everything there is reason, maybe she did just want out of the marriage and could not pluck up the courage to say or possibly the onset of a mental illness altering her behaviour. We are all fragile human beings and none of us are as tough as we like to believe. So it's a good story about how not to deal with a problem and merits more chapters by this author or another.
Anonymousover 8 years agoWhy did he leave, tell her to get the fuck out as why should he suffer. If she doesnt leave start throughing her clothes out. Let the bitch realize she lost everything they have. Cancel everything online that can be instantly. Protect all assets as she will be prepared by her words.
Anonymousover 7 years agodamned if you do damned if you don't, i'l be damned
is this correct?
damned if i know!
tazz317over 7 years agothat be the question, but it ain't over till its fat lady time, TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhat was the point of this story? Damned If I Know? Where does it go from here? Damned If I Know. What rating, if any, should I give it? Like all stories with no obvious ending, damned if I know.
Anonymousover 4 years agoHonestly, I never found out. Oh, she was back with her first husband less than a month after I left, but she was only with him for 6 weeks before she ran him off, too. She has had dates with two other men since then. But she seems to just enjoy chasing men off. Like the title of this story...Damn If I KnowD
Anonymousabout 4 years agoNEVER leave the house. Make her leave the house. Leaving could be viewed as abandonment by the Courts. And how did this end? No ending equals no story.
1 star
Stubbyoneabout 1 year agoYour writing isn’t bad, you just need to come up with a decent plot and somehow finish the story. A slice of life can be fine, but your slices are too thin.
Astordatairabout 1 year agoThis story is like tofu: good starting material, but lacks some other ingredients and a bit more preparation before we can say it is good.
