All Comments on 'Damn Jock Got Me'

I'd love to read more!

i love this story

I like this a lot but you definitely need to do more with the jock fucking Rae and then Sarah (or both at the same time!) Would love to see him take off his clothes and turn them on with his god-like muscles, despite their mental insistence that they're not turned on by that sort of thing.

Very interested!

jocks fucking nerdy girls is a story we need more of and this is a sexy start

finish it and more!

I'd like Sarah's POV on how she got seduced by the jock, but definitely want to see him fuck Rae. Also, have you considered a POV from the jock himself? I think Rae getting fucked should be from her own POV, though, to see her defenses crumble against him and her start to not only go along with the sex but really, really enjoy it.

OMG THIS GETS ME

i hate jerks like this but OMG muscle guys and guys in charge make me just...i don't know why but they get me soooooo wet

Loved the start of your stories so far, may need a few more details here n there but love them none the less, would love to see where it goes and with Sarahs pov please

Sequel, please.

do more chapters! love this story

More! Where's the rest? Please continue it!

Please, please(!!!) continue this story. Both Sarah's POV and continuation sound good to me. Why not both? I will read every word you publish.

It was a decent setup but lacked a lot of build up.

I like the TorD plot device -but it needs to slow down. Maybe just the making out in the first night. She goes home all atwitter and they have a disappointing sex session at home. The couple runs into Eric around campus later who invites them to another party. Guy is hesitant, but she is actually interested (after all, she had a blast). She convinces husband to go. Another similar scene to last time except just touching her ("it's just over her clothes dork. quit being lame"). Another turned on wife goes home to disappointing session with hubby. Another party that she gets upset at hubby for not wanting to go to. They go and this time hubby is sent away. They go home but she doesn't tell him what happened and seems irritated by his pestering. She has hubby go down on her.

You get the idea. Draw it out and make it into a conversion process. Not a single make-out seduction.

Really good start, looking forward to the rest so hopefully you do another chapter soon

Make a pt.2 of this like yesterday!