All Comments on 'Dan and the Bottle'

I like it, but it's hard to tell if the ending is the end of a chapter, or only half of a longer submission. Either way, I would definitely read more. Good work. Keep it up.

Of I'm not quite sure how many parts.... I'm kinda making it up as I go. Thanks.

Queen says verrrrry nice Dan, I feel it....more to come?

better not wake up and spoil them, TK U MLJ LV NV

ITs a nice story but for the life of me why would anyone want to live in a cave.

Keep reading, you'll find out why they're in the bunker.

Okay, you've obviously been spying on me.

Like your protagonist, I have experienced a stroke, followed by a series of heart attacks. And, sad to say, I too am... less-than-gifted in the "size" department, shall we say. :(

I am also eking by on SSD (Social Security Disability), and have contemplated suicide on more than one occasion.

At this point, I am thinking that maybe I should start collecting old bottles!

I'm enjoying the story so far,

-Rei

Nice to see a Michigan story going again. Enjoyed this first chapter. Time to get into the rest!