All Comments on 'Dan Moves In And Unites The Whole Family'

The story would have been better if the sister would have been

a preteen--I read a story about the death of the parents had left

an older brother(18 or 19) and his younger sister(9 or 10)

alone. After the funeral, the younger sister starts crying later that

night and crawls into bed with her older brother--you know what happen after that.

That story turned me on more than any story that I have read--

I cannot seem to find it again.

Maybe some one else will write one like it.

Very good story! Keep it up;no pun intended.