All Comments on 'Dana'

It's the wife?!!! Holy crap, what a surprise ending!!! I never saw coming!!!!!!

Jesus, can you guys either stop with these lame stories where the wife isn't really cheating or at least try to make them more interesting and less transparent.

That anonymous fellow can go fuck himself.

Easy to figure out but always nice when a loving husband and wife decide to play amongst themselves.

most would only dream of this... few would do... thanks

A good story...A story about a couple that keep their fantasies between them it's always a good LW story...3*

When I thought she was heating I was gong to give you 5 stars, but to find out they're married...well done! I didn't see it coming and you painted a phenomenol picture.

Very well done!

Well written but predictable. A refreshing way to keep a marriage vibrant & have variance. Your plot comes from a often used template but your writing style & imagery sets your story apart to be worthy of note. Kudos!

I think your version was very well done. Congratulations and Thanks!

very erotic, thanks

Not badly done but certainly no surprise that she turns out to be playing a game with her husband. Maybe because it's been done a lot lately is what made this ho hum. Not particularly sexy or erotic. Boring.

Very enjoyable take on the theme. Well done first effort here. Looking forward to more of your submissions

While predictable it was good. On to playing games at a bar...

Nice

and less of the cum guzzling cucky, wannabe faggot kind

then how much more exciting would the real thing be? Eventually she will want to find out. To role play adultery for the excitement makes about as much sense to role play rape, or murder, for the excitement. All bad actions start out as bad ideas.

always fun to do it again, like riding a roller coaster, catching that big bass, can't get enough of it. Well written, quite erotic.

Five, of course.

Jedd Clampett

Sheer unadulterated crap. No *

I guessed the plot in the first few lines but the heat of the encounter was devastating.

I'm usually pretty good at deriving end results well before the end of the story. Well done! At what seemed like another wife gone astray, ended up with yet another of my own fantasies coming true.

Thank you, Lancerlott!

mostly because it has been done (overdone?)before.

Impressive beginning. It was inevitable that your passion would play out exactly as it did. I trust there are many more stories lurking about? Wonderful!!!!!!!

So sexy and very well written. Loved the ending!

Thanks for sharing.

Wow. That was a great story. It was well written and I enjoyed the flow of the story. Made me very wet.

Truly awesome story💞, please write more.

Loved the surprise ending!!!

A bit of a surprise. I enjoyed it.

nice twist at the end too

nice

Good one. I had a fleeting thought that maybe it was hubby. Much better way to fulfill a fantasy than with a stranger, and emails lend themselves to communicating desires that are hard to voice.

Loved it.

this was cuter than it had any right to be! i'm not a fan of hetero-, but this was an enjoyable read through and through. thank you for posting this steaming-hot quickie, dear author!

Loved it. 5*

Better than all that Cuck, Wimp & Slut shit

Very well done, a real pleasure to read!

Abnormal acts are todays normal

Great story with a real nice twist. Well done!