by Calpurnius Erex
this story contained such passion but at a controlled pace...excellent story
I thought this story was excellent. It flowed well and you could feel the passion in the words. And to find a couple that could reconnect after it all, an amazing feat.
wow. I am speachless. Absolutely amazing story...great story line...very well written. 10 out of 10
A real life dilema for many of us trying to provide a better life for those that we love. Never forget the importance of love and a life partner; try not to take each other for granted. We all know that it happens, but recognize when it does happen and try not to let it happen again.
Good story. Nice touches.
This story contains a very valuable truth that many people don't "get". At the end of life there is probably no business person who thinks "I should have spent more time in the office.". It is time with the valuable people in our lives that make things worthwhile. The story is well written and carries a very valuable lesson.
Yet possibly one of the most romantic stories on this site. Well done