All Comments on 'Dance Fever'

It was a somewhat predictable ending, but very well written and good exploration of a complex and difficult set of personalities. An emphatic 5 stars.

Great read!

Whatever works for you!

4

Good story but needs editing, especially regarding transitions. There’s also comic potential here that’s unrealized. Good could be great.

I feel like this was probably somewhat autobiographical. Proceeding from that assumption I enjoyed your work a great deal. I do feel that assuming a personal connection from an arrangement as frank and business-like as the one which was proposed was quite unlikely to end in any other way.

But it would be a hell of a ride.