All Comments on 'Dance for the Broken'

Your story is very sensual, thoughtful, sexual and poetic. Everything eroticism should be and pornography is not. Simply said, it is art and I enjoyed it very much. Your use of imagery, similes and metaphors is, for this writer-wannabe, inspirational. I look forward to reading more from you.

Of all the things that are impressive, this one has blown me away. Sexy and attractive and well done and thoughtful and something that most writing in general is not. I think my only disappointment was that you didn't have more available to read. I hope the rest of your stuff is as good.