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by cessna42

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Get an Editor!

I quite reading after 3 paragraphs because of grammer, punctuation and spelling errors. Your mistakes were a huge turn-off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Got to love critics...

I love when someone criticizes a writer, especially about spelling, and then makes a mistake on the second word.

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