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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love it

Great concept and an engaging story. I love how you tell a story and how I can really feel involved in what I'm reading. Your flow is great and your description better.

jmcharl1jmcharl1almost 6 years ago
So good . . .

This was one of the more original stories i’ve read here.

It also has a lot of potential for more chapters. I would love to see you to keep writing this further and develop the characters.

Thank you for the story 🙂

44chicken44chickenalmost 6 years ago
That’s 2 for 2...

Second story of yours I’ve read. Second story I’ve loved. Well done.

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Wow, didn't realise it had been so long since I posted anything here... Well, I be changing that - there's a backlog of stuff written, and I'll be working my way through them every few days as I gear my brain up for a planned project.