All Comments on 'Dancing with Danger'

by Milliemoon

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Jena121Jena121about 16 years ago
Danger ...........

YES YES YES - MORE MORE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Totally agree

This was really hot, great build-up, nice and slow as seduction should be. There is lots of scope for not one but several sequels.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great job

Excellent, please continue this wonderful story line. Mom could introduce him to the joys of anal, perhaps.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Almost

Keep trying, you almost got it...

tenbears43tenbears43about 16 years ago
Nice story

Mike should learn all he can from Mom. Things will get sweeter for him

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No complants

Just a little suggestion,describe the sex more for example,lock her stocking encased long legs around him and let her shag him back,you know what I mean.

AhabscribeAhabscribeabout 16 years ago
Lovely!

It has been done before, but rarely so well. Lovely story that built up the tension well and culminated in a wonderful love scene. I anxiously await your next!

cncstevecncsteveabout 16 years ago
confusing at 1st

Who's telling the story? First it was in 1st person then in 3rd. Otherwise, good tale

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
:-)

Told yer!!!!!!!!!!!! bfn

kinkycuriouskinkycuriousabout 16 years ago
YUMMY

mmmm, perhaps follow up will include the daughter's version of what she saw just happen before her eyes

NGGurtonNGGurtonabout 16 years ago
Is there more?

I loved your story, but is there more? I got the impression it was the beginning of a series. Or that it could be. Too many authors who write about this type of relationship, build a good story, the better ones take more time to focus on the non-sexual details more, but then we never hear from them again. So is there more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
So True

to life,its hard to believe this is a work of fiction.Women authors write the best mom/son stories,I have my own little theory about that having"suffered" a similar fate at the hands of my mother. It did no harm because none off the other family had any idea what was going on. This could be a long series as their relationship develops I hope you do not introduce anal,that would ruin it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Almost the same for me, but I backed away

I truly enjoyed the story and I too feel it should become a continuing affair.

Will you, Milliemoon, give us more?

desibandhudesibandhualmost 16 years ago
mmmm .. loved it

loved ur story ..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Absolutely wonderful!

A wonderful read. I can't help but think it is more than a fantasy.

knickerlessalwaysknickerlessalwaysabout 15 years ago
What can I say?

Milliemoon, this is a story after my own heart. I could identify with Mom all the way through. Though it is only on paper I want to send you kisses!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
Sweet love between mom and son

He could have knocked mom up, and that would have tied them together forever. Such a loving and warm story. Thanks .........Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

EXCELLENT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
No. 1 Rating. Class A+++

Awesome ..

Love to see more as good as this !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

hi, please continue with another chapter or two. great story!!!

johnstang2johnstang2over 3 years ago
Beautiful and romantic

I love your stories that I have read. They are so romantic it took my breath away. Now I love mother and son stories so you must have some clue as to the other story must be. This review applies for both of them. Well done sir. They are the type of love story that gets me going. So so hot.

OseekerOseeker12 months ago

It'd be pretty arousing to hear your own mom talking dirty and being slutty wanting to fuck you.

3 of 5 stars...

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