by Milliemoon
This was really hot, great build-up, nice and slow as seduction should be. There is lots of scope for not one but several sequels.
Excellent, please continue this wonderful story line. Mom could introduce him to the joys of anal, perhaps.
Mike should learn all he can from Mom. Things will get sweeter for him
Just a little suggestion,describe the sex more for example,lock her stocking encased long legs around him and let her shag him back,you know what I mean.
It has been done before, but rarely so well. Lovely story that built up the tension well and culminated in a wonderful love scene. I anxiously await your next!
Who's telling the story? First it was in 1st person then in 3rd. Otherwise, good tale
mmmm, perhaps follow up will include the daughter's version of what she saw just happen before her eyes
I loved your story, but is there more? I got the impression it was the beginning of a series. Or that it could be. Too many authors who write about this type of relationship, build a good story, the better ones take more time to focus on the non-sexual details more, but then we never hear from them again. So is there more?
to life,its hard to believe this is a work of fiction.Women authors write the best mom/son stories,I have my own little theory about that having"suffered" a similar fate at the hands of my mother. It did no harm because none off the other family had any idea what was going on. This could be a long series as their relationship develops I hope you do not introduce anal,that would ruin it.
I truly enjoyed the story and I too feel it should become a continuing affair.
Will you, Milliemoon, give us more?
A wonderful read. I can't help but think it is more than a fantasy.
Milliemoon, this is a story after my own heart. I could identify with Mom all the way through. Though it is only on paper I want to send you kisses!
He could have knocked mom up, and that would have tied them together forever. Such a loving and warm story. Thanks .........Rich
I love your stories that I have read. They are so romantic it took my breath away. Now I love mother and son stories so you must have some clue as to the other story must be. This review applies for both of them. Well done sir. They are the type of love story that gets me going. So so hot.
It'd be pretty arousing to hear your own mom talking dirty and being slutty wanting to fuck you.
3 of 5 stars...