All Comments on 'Dancing with Mr. Miller'

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WritingForToffeeWritingForToffeeabout 3 years ago

Cool, intimate, kinky and sweet.

More please :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Intensely sexy

The act of seduction rarely gets the chance it deserves to shine with the stories on this site but this was an absolute and supreme example of the form done right. Where the buildup to sex itself is so sexy that actually crossing the finish line into sex seems lesser somehow than the brilliant seduction beforehand. Bravo

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Who needs hot water for coffee when the blood boils inside and kick-starts your morning like this? Loved how abandon takes over the moment, only the lack of the initial trigger - the end of the playlist - is noticed, but the rest of the world forgotten behind the (mental) curtains. A sensual dance with a Happy end for both.

Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Whew!!! *fans myself* Well done, my friend!

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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what you’ve read. I’m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...